Middle School Logo ??

I am working with the synod office in a few different areas. One area is to help develop and pull off the first ever middle school gathering. I think that I am more of a sounding board and throwing out ... have you looked at it from this angle ??

However, one of the jobs that was assigned to me was to see if I could come up with a logo for the event (gathering) and to come up with one that would "stick" and be used for years to come and tie in with future themes ....

So, here is what I am proposing: